Resubmissios Essay

Throughout this essay I will be discussing the skills that I need to work on with it being personal skills and skills that pertain to writing essays. And I will be discussing personal strengths, weaknesses and capabilities that would feed into me being a better writer. Lastly, I will be going over the things I will do to improve my strengths, weaknesses and capabilities in order to become a writer.

            Before this class I didn’t realize that there are skills that I need to improve.  For example, when writing I can be nonchalant and not too much of a perfectionist. Those are qualities that should not go together but they are two major things that sometimes have a negative effect on my performance. When I bring up being nonchalant I don’t mean completely being careless. I mean that by when I am in writing and something isn’t right, or I’m confused about something I don’t want help. I want to figure my problems out by myself which affect my work load. So, when it comes to being nonchalant that is something I need to work on because when writing an I see my grade outcome I really care, and it is way harder to fix things at the last minute.                      There is a lot of room for me to work on my strengths, weaknesses and capabilities. I can work on my strengths by being more dependable in when it seems like the situation is impossible and not giving up as easily. I can work on being more responsible and courteous by making sure I improve eon getting assignments in on time. I can fix my weaknesses while writing by asking for input and not being scared. And when it comes to improving my capabilities, I can improve using my resources by listening to my teacher and asking her she finds her resources, and about the different ways on how she chooses to find resources and use them in a way that it still understanding to readers.

            In conclusion, I may have the good and bad skills of being nonchalant, introvert, and Scared to ask question. Which has its good and bad effects but with the right improvements they will result to the fundamentals of being a good writer. Same with my strength, weaknesses and capabilities. My strengths contain of having a creative mind, not using words to big when writing an essay. My weaknesses consist of time management, being an introvert and being Shy at times to much which negatively affect time when writing. Lastly, my capabilities I’m capable of coming up with a lot of innovative ideas due to my creativity and I am great at projects and handling different topics, and   due to me being able to handle a wide variety of topics I am usually confident about my outline when constructing an essay. But, with having all of those trait and skills there is always room for improvement. And I feel if I can improve every last one those, it will make me into a successful writer.

bonus 11 what makes it funny Montaya Mccloud

Everyone finds different things funny, some people hide their pain through laughter. A lot of comedians use culture, weight and politics to make jokes. A famous comedian who does that is Kat Williams. There has been several comedy shows recorded where Kat Williams could have offended someone but they are seen as funny because he is in the same in-group of the people he are making jokes about. Famous jokes from Kat Williams are ones about poverty such as “Gas is so mother'f****in high. Hot Damn gas. Shit!! You are not supposed to be at the gas station making life decisions. You just at the pump, "Did I eat today?" "I can get no half a tank, I've got 3 cigarettes." The joke is only funny because Kat Williams is a minority who has been through poverty, so people see it as him relating to them making a joke about how life is.  Even though Kat Williams isn’t still in poverty and has money people still get a sense that he is in their in-group, because he has once been through what situation they are in. Also, the fact that Not eating and gas are things that are serious him bringing light to them by comedy make viewers also laugh because they fell like what he says is truthful and take away from how provocative the whole scenario is. A lot of Comedy men use this tactic, but it is not limited to them women do it also. The Famous Comedian Amy Schumer uses downing herself all the time to create jokes. She consistently talks about her body, Sexuality and woman parts and how they are not perfect to make people laugh. Amy makes a lot of jokes about being a woman and doing things that are not seen as “The Norm” or looked good upon in society by others. For example, “You feel like such a dirty whore buying plan b. It is so embarrassing because it’s over the counter, but you have to ask you pharmacist, and they know what you want but they make you ask. They’re lookin’ at me, I’m like, you see where my eyeliner is just give it to me”-Amy Schumer. A lot of people think very provocative jokes are funny.  I know a lot of people that personally use jokes to cover up their struggles and the seriousness of certain issues going on in the world this is not just used in comedy but movies, TV Shows and books also. The reason people do this reaches back to Elementary school days. People love to laugh when the joke is not on them. People love to feel like they are indifferent or have a hierarchy to others when laughing at them Laughing brings a sense of Positive Energy and a Feeling of empowerment when the joke is not directed towards them. Little does the Audience Realize in contradict comedians flip jokes in a sense that the audience feel like that they are laughing at the comedian but in all reality, they are laughing at themselves when jokes are relatable.